Six Sentence Sunday-14

This is a continuation of the scene from Target Identified, The Target Series, available through my website at Amazon and Smashwords, I posted the last time we were here.

“Sorry, first class only.” Her short declaration was all she could muster.

His response, simple and direct. He held up his left hand presenting her with a view of a matched gold band, on his left ring finger. “Just waiting for the aisle to clear.” His voice softly seductive, melting any resistance she might have had.

Don’t forget to check out other great snippets this week by clicking here-

This Tuesday will bring soon to be published author Ciara Knight to the blog. Her debut novel will be released in March 2012. She’ll be discussing the use of short stories, novellas and anthologies as promotional tools. This discussion should be very valuable for those of you out there who enjoy packing a whole story into a few well choice words. Ciara can be found daily, weekends excluded, at

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33 Responses to Six Sentence Sunday-14

  1. Arlene Webb says:

    Interesting encounter, I’d love to read more from this guy whose voice is so hot.

  2. I’m sure that’s all he’s waiting for. Sounds like he’s planning to give her some trouble, although, not necessary bad. 😉

  3. Heather Thurmeier says:

    Intriguing snippet! Looking forward to more next week.

  4. Proach says:

    Great description.

  5. Lots of intrigue…what’s he really want? MEN 😛 Nice Six

  6. roseanne says:

    Very intriquing. You have me hooked.

  7. Ooh I bet she lets him get away with it too 🙂

  8. He shows her a wedding ring and she melts? I hope she’s his wife!

  9. Lorien Velez says:

    Whoa. Interesting snippet. Are they role playing? 🙂

  10. Meg Mims says:

    Hmmmm. Interesting encounter is right!

  11. J.A. Beard says:

    Nothing quite like a sexy voice. 🙂

  12. Casi says:

    He feels the need to enforce the fact that he’s married? That’s odd.

  13. Lynne Murray says:

    Great tension! Intriguing six!

  14. pippajay says:

    Wow, that must be some voice he has. 🙂

  15. J.C. Martin says:

    Dang! Is that a wedding ring? 😦 Curious to see how they’re going to get round that!

    • Lindsay says:

      Things, at least when I’m writing the story, aren’t always what they seem to be. Don’t worry they MIGHT get around that little piece of gold. But you’ll have to stay tuned to find out.

  16. gayleramage says:

    Great snippet! We all love a seductive voice, lol!

  17. Cate Masters says:

    I agree, an intriguing encounter! Looking forward to reading more.

  18. Nice six, wonder how she is going to handle that voice…and that gold band!

  19. OK, now I am intrigued – especially after reading all your comment replies 🙂 What is really going on In wonder?

  20. Ranae Rose says:

    Well, that’s one way to get a seat upgrade on a plane. ; ) (Assuming that’s where they are, that is.)

  21. Lisa Kumar says:

    Sounds like he’s planning something!

  22. jennajaxon says:

    I somehow feel that ring is for show only. If not, she’s really got a problem! Great six!

  23. I hope that ring isn’t legit! Great 6 🙂

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