My Wednesday hook paragraph is a little further into Ice Queen, my WIP.
All I can say about this paragraph, don’t mess with this woman. Looks can be deceiving.
“Yep, and if you don’t want to sing with the Vienna Boys Choir, I’d suggest you remove your hand. Oh,” She paused to let the first words sink into his lecherous brain. “And look down if you don’t believe me.”
Clever and to the point. I imagine the guy got the message!